August 9, 2007

Which Version Should I Send?

This is the same card taken in two different locations in my home, so ignore the lighting, etc. The only difference is that one has the pewter hodgepodge hardware on it. I originally went with the plain version, added the spiral, and then removed it. This is a sympathy card for my grade school/high school best friend, whose husband died. I'd appreciate some feedback on which version to send. I'm sending it tomorrow (Friday), so a quick comment would be appreciated. Supplies: Sentiment from Wordsworth clear Comfort set; Color Box Prussian Blue Cat's Eyes Chalk ink; coordinating Prussian Blue Prism paper from Cornish Heritage Farms; SU Fine Lace Background, Cardstock Vellum, white grosgrain ribbon, punch and dimensionals (the sentiment is popped up); white eyelets (source unknown); Crop a Dile and Japanese Screw Punch. By the way, the little dot to the right of the word "praised" is part of the stamp. Looks like a mistake to me, so I stamped it twice before noting that it is supposed to be there. Thanks

25 comments:

  1. I prefer the one without the spiral. Do like the spiral, just not for this. My heart hurts for her - - lost my husband 14 months ago and know it's not an easy road.
    Today I'll be - anonymous, but I visit here regularly and comment occasionally and love your family stories as well as your art. Hugs and prayers for you both.

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  2. I do think without. If the spiral would be dark blue or white, maybe, but even though its a cool idea, maybe not on the white ribbon.

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  3. I think the one without the spiral - it's such an elegant, classic card - the spiral seems out of place to me. I think it's a little trendy or mod for such a classic style card.

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  4. I like the spiral which lends itself to being a symbol of the circular nature of life... and I like the contrast in colors.

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  5. i like the one without the spiral for the purpose of a sympathy card. Looks more elegant.

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  6. I like the one with the Hodgepodge clip - I think the swirl goes with the swirl on the patterned paper.

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  7. With the spiral clip. It's the little touches that make the card more special that store-bought. It looks nice.

    PS, Does Wordsworth still exist? Do they have a web site? I couldn't find a web site last time I searched. Of course, "wordsworth" brings up a lot of non-rubberstamp sites, for some unknown reason (wink).

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  8. I like the one with the spiral. I think it's a great detail. Love the sentiment.

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  9. i say no spiral. the card is simple and elegant and the spiral just kinda seems like an afterthought with no real connection to the card - which, btw, i really like. it's a beautiful sympathy card. my prayers for your friend.

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  10. I'm in favor of without clip. More subdued and elegant.

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  11. I'd go with no clippie. It is a beautiful sentiment.

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  12. Use the spiral...it has a very nice touch to it!

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  13. I love them both but prefer the one without the spiral. The spiral detracts from the warmth and simple elegance of your card.

    I am very sorry that your girlfriend lost her husband.

    Mary

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  14. Joan, I love them both, but prefer the one without the spiral. What a touching quote. So sorry for your friend's loss.

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  15. Joan, both look nice, but I prefer the first card without the spiral. Simple seems appropriate, the words are what she will focus on. The spiral detracts a bit from that in my opinion.

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  16. I vote on the no spiral side. I like both but think the one without the hardware is just softer and more elegant. So sorry to hear of her loss. You realize once you have gone through any type of loss what the cards and calls mean. I save every single one from when my Mom died last October. Planning on making a memory book out of them. Kay

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  17. I would pick anywhere in the North Texas area. First, the shopping. Nobody ever pays full price in this area. Second, No state income taxes! I haven't seen any big bugs. You can get most everywhere from the DFW airport. If you lived close enough I bet you could join Emily Giovanni's stamp group! Housing is affordable (600,000 would get you a big stamp room here) there are plenty of cultural activities and several universities and world class healthcare. What more could you ask for (except a really good air conditioner in the summer)!

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  18. I like the second on . The one with out the spiral clip.

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  19. I would send the one to the right. They are both lovely though and I must say the spiral was the deciding factor too.
    NG.

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  20. the one with the spiral is pretty to me. It adds just enough extra without being distracting

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  21. I prefer the one without the spiral. Beautiful card. My heart goes out to your friend - and to you who mourn with/for her. ~ pk

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  22. I like the one without the spiral.

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  23. This comment may be too late for the mail, but I agree with Etha. I think that the spiral would be a nice extra touch, but in white. I think that if you don't have a white spiral or other small white embellishment that you should go without the spiral. The words should be the main focus. So sorry to hear about your friend's loss. You are a great friend to be so concerned about sending the right card!

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  24. I feel the spiral is a bit too jaunty for a sympathy card, so I'd go without.

    Lovely card. Love the sentiment (good ole Will)

    barb

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  25. I a little late...would have voted for the card without the hardware... and now I am curious...which one did you choose?
    My heart goes out to your friend.

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